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E M O by ~nightmarephynix:iconnightmarephynix:

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Emo

My scars
The stars
They both show the way
The pain
The rain
They both come to play
The Ice
It’s nice
All of its gone numb
My price
A slice
Ok that was dumb
The ground
No sound
My body falls again
Her glaze
The blaze
I see myself in Hell
A fight
At night
Someone has to lose
One hit
I quit
Reduced to drinking booze
No walk
Just talk
I do just as I please
Perfect day
Just to play
Life’s a road of ease
Us together
Two forever
Again I see you lie
I can’t
I rant
Again I wont reply
The end
My friend
I’ve made my choice
To drink
Not think
Another silenced voice
©2007-2009 ~nightmarephynix
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I'm not depressed right now, not really. I'm just writing this as something to do, cause i can do emo writing without much issue. i wrote this to do a new rhyme scheem. cause you know i can do the ABAB and the AABB just fine but this is a cool AABCCB yeah.. good times. lemme know what you think. cause a part of me thinks i'm losing my touch. Well, enjoy ^__^
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~dragonblossoms:icondragonblossoms: Jun 9, 2007, 7:41:12 PM

Damn, I LOVE this. :+favlove:

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!Analog-Nexus:iconAnalog-Nexus: Jun 9, 2007, 10:14:44 PM
That's cool and your not losing your touch that's good!!!!!!

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~nightmarephynix:iconnightmarephynix: Jun 9, 2007, 11:03:02 PM
well thank you! atleast someone doesn't think my song writing abilitys went to hell after i stared drawing :P thanks, and thanks for the favorite!

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~nightmarephynix:iconnightmarephynix: Jun 9, 2007, 11:08:19 PM
thanks ^_^ glad you feel that way!

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Open your eyes and look above! I am not a bird, or a plane. I'm am not superman, though i have come to save your life. I'm not what you think i am, i'm not who you were told. I'm not a hero, i'm not your savior, i'm just a man sent by fate, nothing more..
~black-band:iconblack-band: Jun 10, 2007, 3:06:13 AM
this is pretty, i like it alot.
I'm glad you aren't 'depressed'

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~nightmarephynix:iconnightmarephynix: Jun 10, 2007, 11:55:24 AM
thanks!

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Open your eyes and look above! I am not a bird, or a plane. I'm am not superman, though i have come to save your life. I'm not what you think i am, i'm not who you were told. I'm not a hero, i'm not your savior, i'm just a man sent by fate, nothing more..
!Analog-Nexus:iconAnalog-Nexus: Jun 10, 2007, 9:54:13 PM
Well you are good. I'm not going to not let somone that is good and thinks they are not think that. You are very good.

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~nightmarephynix:iconnightmarephynix: Jun 10, 2007, 11:09:01 PM
well, thank you. i still don't think i'm that good, but, thats cause i'm over critical! thanks!

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Open your eyes and look above! I am not a bird, or a plane. I'm am not superman, though i have come to save your life. I'm not what you think i am, i'm not who you were told. I'm not a hero, i'm not your savior, i'm just a man sent by fate, nothing more..
!Analog-Nexus:iconAnalog-Nexus: Jun 11, 2007, 10:30:29 PM
No way you are so awsome I wish I could be as good as you! You rock. You should be proud of what you do it is amazing. If I could only do half of what you do. You rock.

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I'm not weird... I'm gifted. :)




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